Some people think the developments of technology make people’s life more complex, so we should make the life simpler without using technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Over the past century, science and technology has developed unprecedentedly and changed every aspect of people’s life. Some people suggest a simple lifestyle without using modern technology. In my point of view, technology brings about higher efficiency and greater convenience, even though it causes confusion and disorder in certain circumstances.
The benefits of modern technology are multiple. Nobody would deny the fact that computer technology has significantly improved the productivity of the society. Automation is widely used in the assembly line, which sets free millions of people from the arduous and repetitive word in factories. Thanks to the widespread use of Internet, people have more access to information than ever before, people can acquire the information they need via online database. Moreover, emails and mobile phones enable people to keep in touch with their business partners and friends more conveniently and efficiently, compared with the old way of going to post office or visiting people in person.
However, some people show their concern that technology leads to more complexity and inconvenience. For instance, a huge amount of information on the internet if false or misleading, as the source of the information is not identified. People waste plenty of time every day in surfing the Internet, chatting on the web and deleting junk mails. Another example is genetically modified food, which poses a risk to people’s health due to the uncertainty of its security.
Despite the voice against the application of technology, I am confident that a better future of mankind lies with the future development of science and technology. It is important to be aware of the negative impact of technology, but returning to simple life without technology is by no means a solution.
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| 2019-05-30 | Nguyen Ngoc Nhu Thuy | 89 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, for instance, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41197183099 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07142984833 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633802816901 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.12481003 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.785714286 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.78571428571 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298426589166 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960293505387 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069409983748 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170769317932 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407653417605 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.