Some people think that the earth is being filled with waste material such as plastic bag or other rubish material .Is this really happening .what are some solution to this problem

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Some people think that the earth is being filled with waste material such as plastic bag or other rubish material .Is this really happening .what are some solution to this problem

It is undoubtedly for the case that unuseful material such as plastic bag which is also affecting the society adversly .In this essay , I am going to examine the possible reasons for this trend and suggest some of the practial policis that authorities could improvement to reduse this problem.

The first step is to understand why this is happening .Broadly speaking there are three main reasons for this.The first and foremost is lack of education.When,people have no knowledge about their environment.So,they can do it.There is almost certainly no solution to this problem given the complexity of its causes.However,one option has to improve this problem.Every year,Government should held camp to related the waste material.So,people aware to this problem and they can easily handle.

One of the causes of this could be industrillation.when any worker in this industry to take outof harmful chemical material into the soil and thoughin yhe water.so this will be create the diffenert pollution which is bad effect in human being ,animals,together with created many problems.people suffer many harmful diseases.it would also be re-cycle material which is used at second time.grow more and more trees near about the factories because plants reduce the pollution.

In conclusion,there are variety of different factors that have led to make this problem worsewhile it may be not possible to find a complete solution of this.This could probabely solved by government apply the new law about this waste material and people follow this rule.when any individual not follow this rule then neccesary to pay the fine for every people.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, second, so, then, while, as to, broadly speaking, in conclusion, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38671875 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.40353288429 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64453125 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 64.0 20.2975951904 315% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.8640834982 49.4020404114 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 344.75 106.682146367 323% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 64.0 20.7667163134 308% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 25.75 7.06120827912 365% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360984267913 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.217313165734 0.084324248473 258% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0307233343809 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217313165734 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307233343809 0.056905535591 54% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.0 13.0946893788 275% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -1.94 50.2224549098 -4% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.4 11.3001002004 260% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.87 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.19 8.58950901804 130% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 27.6 10.1190380762 273% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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