some people think that the education system should only focus on preparing students for employment, while other believe it other important function. discuss both the view and give you opinion.
education is vital role for everyone life. In morden generation everyone wants surpassing education because education is the essential aspect of our lifemanship. At this time we can see ‘Rural area’ also aware about it. some people think that education is the only for an employment and get job while other some people think education is the important more than an employment. Although, both condition have given priority of education but there are some differences and similarities between both condition.
In my opinion education is a vital role for human lifemanship. we need food for live as similar we have need of education to live. In morden generation we cannot do anything without knowledge of education. we can say education is the essential aspect for everyone life. computer is the basic need for everyone at this time. In few previous years computer has become powerful resource to get knowledge. if do not have basic knowledge of education, then nether we can use of computer nor can we avail through it. so we should have knowledge of education without any anonymously thinking.
While some people believe education is the way of an employment. if we think kind of this way then it is totally inappropriate aspect for us. Yes we can get an employment through education but get a good employment is the only one aspect of our life. we should not study for only for get a good employment because a good employment cannot fulfil our need. so we should have knowledge about whole things around us after that we will see lifemanship is engaging more than any aspect.
In conclusion we should not think that education is the only for an employment because good education only relict only one part of our life. if we have good knowledge of education then we will do anything in our life and it will also help to adopt surpassing habits through it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, while, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 29.0 8.3376753507 348% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.915625 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74934473727 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.4125 0.561755894193 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.4678302324 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.65 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216316324426 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857101595568 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0960838356782 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161006711272 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0794461311504 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.7 8.58950901804 78% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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