Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve, while others think that the government cannot solve these environmental problems unless individuals make some action.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In today's modern world, environmental crisis has become a major concern, resulting in several debates on who is responsible to solve them. A part of the population believes that individual action is not enough, while others claim that without it government will not be able to deal with them. This essay will discuss both views and will also state why I strongly believe that government has an indispensable role in such matters.
To begin, the vast majority of the population consider small action to prevent environmental disasters, as useless. However, these minor things can actually prevent detrimental consequences. For example, throwing used batteries into general waste bins and not in certain bins could become very dangerous for the environment due to the fluids that bataries produce when they melt and when these fluids may be absorbed by the ground. Thus, a few seconds to decide where should we dispose several items can prevent ecological disasters.
While some people think that government cannot control environmental problems without its citizen's effort, I believe that it should have the first word in these circumstances. Each goverment and the parliament must not rely on peoples will to contribute to public issues, but they have to introduce new laws and strong penalty fees to those who do not follow them. For instance, each house should have different colored bins for recyclable, non-recyclable and general waste and if constantly some people do not use them appropriately, then the should be penalized. The beginning and the end for every country is its government.
To sum up, an effort done by individuals regarding environmental problems is admirable, however without governments strict action, the environmental chaos that we live will become bigger and bigger day by day.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, may, regarding, second, so, then, thus, while, for example, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31944444444 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8873443387 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618055555556 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8659205496 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.666666667 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26330640013 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0843352898835 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797718396053 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143334369223 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471342750212 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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