Some people think that everyone has the right to have access to university education and that the government should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.
It is believed that the government should waive college tuition fees, regardless of students’ economic background. I somewhat agree with this opinion because it is challenging for numerous people to afford higher education. However, I hold a strong belief that the government’s fully paying for tuition would have an adverse bearing on both students and society.
On the one hand, allowing students to pursue higher education for free is a promising method to solve several social issues. As education bridges the gap between the rich and the poor, making university free for everyone can reduce the social disparity. By receiving scholarships to study at colleges and getting qualifications, people, especially the underprivileged will stand better chances to land reasonably paid jobs instead of getting involved in manual labor after high school. Consequently, the well-being of the population can be improved.
On the other hand, the provision of free tertiary education can affect both students and society negatively. As the job market is increasingly competitive, it would no longer be feasible for job seekers to be employed if most candidates are bachelor’s degree holders. Therefore, several issues such as bribery and corruption not only continue to happen but also get worse. Moreover, the enormous amount of money it takes to cover higher education tuition will become a great financial burden for developing countries such as Vietnam. Once a free-college policy is applied, other taxes will be hiked when budgets for social welfare and insurance may be minimized.
In conclusion, I concede that waiving university tuition seems like a good idea due to the aforementioned benefits related to society. However, I also believe that the government should not make college free for everyone.
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- Some people think that everyone has the right to have access to university education and that the government should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 84
- Some people think that everyone has the right to have access to university education and that the government should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44839857651 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99254613653 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637010676157 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1367036235 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.357142857 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0714285714 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21428571429 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216695190401 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745653743467 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584055848705 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133663290099 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537307613142 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.