Some People think that getting a degree from university is the best way to guarantee a good job; others believe that it would be better to go straight into work and get experience instead.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
While some individuals feel that tertiary education is the most effective method to secure a good job, others think that having experience is more valuable. This essay will discuss both the viewpoints and opines that university education helps an individual to work in highly skilled professions whereas experience is helpful in certain fields.
To begin with the former view, numerous people consider that receiving tertiary education improves the chances of getting a job, which pays well. This is because in this highly competitive era having a bachelor’s or master’s degree puts an applicant one step ahead of others who do not. In addition to this, in order to work in certain professions, such as health care services, teaching and civil services strong academic background is an absolute imperative. Thus, certification from reputed universities is a pre-requisite in order to work in these noble professions.
However, in order to work in business or marketing field one needs relevant experience and soft skills to climb the professional ladder. For instance, if numerous job seekers apply for the position of, an applicant with years of practical exposure may get the job offer even if the applicant does not possess any degree or certificate. Moreover, entrepreneurship is another area where practical knowledge is given utmost important rather than degrees or post-graduate diplomas. Therefore, experience can influence a person’s success in the corporate world.
In conclusion, I believe that if someone wants to own a business experience matters more whereas if one wants to work in a multinational company higher education would be highly beneficial.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52307692308 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14914283444 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634615384615 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3094680407 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.545454545 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6363636364 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2727272727 7.06120827912 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214603899812 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707271005126 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389906560787 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120571654359 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275546267425 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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