Some people think that getting old is a negative thing, whereas others think it is much easier for people to live in modern society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Due to the progressive development of society in recent times, the living standard is so much better compared to the old times. It is argued that getting old is exceedingly awful while some people believe it is not a matter when living in a modern technological environment, including me. I will show you the reasons why.
On the one hand, getting old is an unfortunate thing. In the past, the living conditions were too hard to suffer, and most people had to leave their families, relatives to earn a living. Although, therefore, some individuals who grow old will live by themselves. This makes them have a sense of loneliness and fatigue. Moreover, they might get in trouble because of not having any support from their relatives. Also, several elders could live with their children, but the commonly seen problem is they often become a financial burden for their families. In addition, the service which assisted older people was not widespread at that time.
On the other hand, nowadays, thanks to the improvement of technology, a number of healthcare systems have witnessed an incredible increase. Especially, some techniques also created a slowing of the ageing process, which is beneficial for the elders. Besides that, older people will not feel isolated anymore by experiencing plenty of recreational activities, contemplating many picturesque sceneries, and having a little get together with their family as people are less busy in the current high-quality life. Plus, having a progressive mindset gradually moves towards optimism and gets ready to get old without anxiety instead of avoiding that.
In conclusion, there are a number of people who are still paranoid about growing old. Nevertheless, many valuable medical services were invented these days that help them to welcome it easily.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08223684211 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81796944328 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.677805251 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2666666667 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.13333333333 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242641692448 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763046485078 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501596442348 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141249691258 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479837262531 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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