some people think that good health is important to everyone, so medical services should not be run by profit-making companies. Do the disadvantages of private health care outweigh the advantages?
Nowadays many hold the view that the private health care causes damage to people’s health, whereas there is a body of views holding that private health care also does good to people. In this essay I will examine both sides of the debate to seek a conclusion.
To begin with, it is undeniable that private medical basically provides civilians better medical services. Compared with the public hospital, the private clinic accommodates the smaller number of patients, allowing the doctors and nurses to spend more time on looking after patients. What is more, private health care probably brings convenience to patients and enables the patients to see doctors quickly. In order to earn more money, profit-making companies may build hospitals near or inside the communities due to the fact that they have greater freedom to do so.
On the other hand, however, private health care tends to delay the time when patients should see doctors. This is because the fee spent on the private hospitals in normally more expensive, which prevents poor patients from receiving treatment in time. Furthermore, private operators probably aggravate people’s health problems. To be more specific, to make more profit, private operators will provide some low-quality services such as inferior medicine.
To sum up, there is no doubt that the individual health operators may medically(5) serve people better and offer them convenience. At the same time, however, it(6) probably aggravates patients’ health. In the final analysis, therefore, one can safely conclude that the advantages of individual health care are more obvious.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun hold seems to be countable; consider using: 'many holds'.
Suggestion: many holds
Nowadays many hold the view that the private health care c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, whereas, no doubt, such as, to begin with, to sum up, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41732283465 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75415017214 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629921259843 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1445030506 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.846153846 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315630486646 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104793988385 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066149329423 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188918415761 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335454870031 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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