Some people think that good heath is very important to every person, so medical service should not be run by profit- making companies. DO the advantages of private health care outweigh the disadvantages
It is no doubt that health takes priority over other aspects of life, which brings about the mushrooming of health care service in order to meet the demands of citizen. Although there are several benefits from private health care, however, I buy in to the belief that the disadvantages are overwhelmed.
On the one hand, there are numerous reasons why private clinics attract more and more patients. The primary contributor to this circumstance is that private health care attempts to provide high quality service in order to gain a competitive edge in nowadays market. In addition, it is likely that private health care normally pay more attention and take care of patients more sophisticated than other service. Moreover, private companies have responsibility to employ well-trained employee as well as install up-to-date equipment in order to pull at customers and meet their needs. Another reason is that to found a medical care service, it is necessary for individual to have a prosperous source of finance. This source of money can be allocated in research and innovated therapy that are beneficial for patients.
Apart from advantages I expressed above, the demerits of private health care service brings about should be taken into account. First of all, in order to afford top-notch treatment facilities, price of private health care often costs the earth. In results, only wealthy people can access to innovated treatment opportunity so it is unequal for indigent people in emergency cases. Needless to say, these private service does not put under control of government so that price can fluctuate base on private. What is more, ethical issues of medical practitioners have drawn a mounting concern in society since results can be manipulated to maximize the profit or polish the brand. For example, appearing in news are doctors who prescribe medicine based on the commission from pharmaceutical companies.
In conclusion, even though private health care offers better service and novel facilities than public one, however, the drawbacks are not negligible which directly affect the rights of citizen.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, so, well, apart from, for example, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, as well as, first of all, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1784.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30952380952 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78692866286 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580357142857 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.403649392 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 118.933333333 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.73333333333 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250182341119 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814941767915 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462636222112 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146818614932 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460910730772 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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