Some people think the government funding should not be used for supporting art and culture, others think supporting cultural activities may be beneficial for the population and the culture. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In today's modern world, money and basically the absence of it, has become a major concern resulting in several debates on where should it be spent. Thus, a part of the population believes that art and cultural activities should not be funded by the government, whereas others that any kind of support to arts could have several benefits for the nationals and the culture of the country. This essay will discuss both views and will also state why I strongly believe that the vast majority of governments money should be spent on more important matters.
To begin, it is evident that nowadays each different country faces numerous problems related to the environment, the educational system and even with their territorial integrity. Thus it can be considered as pointless to invest money on art, while there are many other more important actual problems. For example, in Greece, a country with several issues with neighbor countries, uses approximately 60% of the annual amount of taxes to defend its border. From my perspective, every country should prioritize its needs and that is why some people claim that art is not the right way.
On the other hand, any kind of art(music, painting, sculpturing) has several benefits on humans. Through it, people are able to express themselves and create pieces of art and of course, after many decades these can be used as historical stamps. However, personally, I do not believe that these very crucial effects of art might affect the population, due to the fact that most of the people do not care about art.
To conclude, each government has to spend its citizens' money wisely and unfortunately until the day in which people will admire art again and the benefits that it has on us, all the money spend on art will be wasted.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, thus, whereas, while, as to, for example, kind of, of course, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88410596026 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56807026171 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579470198675 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.2529411437 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.090909091 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4545454545 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.27272727273 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246726836116 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0867898402266 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736122515648 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138893686381 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0736473785465 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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