Some people think that government should ban dangerous sports, while others think people should have freedom to do any sports or activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is true that there is an concern of dangerous sports which is widespread and draw to public attentions, other people believe that these should be banned, although people must not be underestimate its consequence to individual and communities as a whole. I would argue that they should freedom to participate whatever sports that they engage in.
On the one hand, people have several strong reasons to the government must imposed official bans and restricted to dangerous sports. Firstly, due to safety reason, there are many extreme case that recuse member of group have put their threaten-life situation to help people who are addicted and intriguing by dangerous sports. Secondly, it is undeniable that being necessary to impose rules to people abide by them, such an non-physical, mental disorder, heart disease, etc. , which is also unsuitable for non-experience people. Such irresponsible action must only prevented by official bans.
On the other hand, I would agree with people who is considered freedom to chose their activity they are enjoyable, although I believe that individual should be abide by safety rule. One reason is that it is reasonably to under injuries and accidents when they take part in. An example is that playing scuba diving and paragliding have to put supervision of professionals and expert in their field. Another situation is that recently the equipment of dangerous sports have been several safety functions to ensure users more effectively to play with them, undermining its consequence when they are at the heaven or deep water. Additionally, they are variety of genre that people are easily to chose this one.
In conclusion, it is should be permitted dangerous sports and participants have to responsible for safety rule that being applied.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 26, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
It is true that there is an concern of dangerous sports which is wi...
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Line 2, column 83, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g reasons to the government must imposed official bans and restricted to dangerou...
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Line 2, column 214, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... many extreme case that recuse member of group have put their threaten-life situa...
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Line 2, column 423, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ose rules to people abide by them, such an non-physical, mental disorder, heart di...
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Line 2, column 476, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...al, mental disorder, heart disease, etc. , which is also unsuitable for non-experi...
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Line 3, column 161, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'abided', 'abode'?
Suggestion: abided; abode
...ugh I believe that individual should be abide by safety rule. One reason is that it i...
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Line 4, column 19, Rule ID: IS_SHOULD[1]
Message: Did you mean 'it'?
Suggestion: it
...y to chose this one. In conclusion, it is should be permitted dangerous sports an...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24475524476 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88071773051 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548951048951 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.5157322203 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.384615385 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236572751232 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815652879377 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647310477748 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159170244633 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429321814428 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 26, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
It is true that there is an concern of dangerous sports which is wi...
^^
Line 2, column 83, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g reasons to the government must imposed official bans and restricted to dangerou...
^^
Line 2, column 214, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... many extreme case that recuse member of group have put their threaten-life situa...
^^
Line 2, column 423, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ose rules to people abide by them, such an non-physical, mental disorder, heart di...
^^
Line 2, column 476, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...al, mental disorder, heart disease, etc. , which is also unsuitable for non-experi...
^^
Line 3, column 161, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'abided', 'abode'?
Suggestion: abided; abode
...ugh I believe that individual should be abide by safety rule. One reason is that it i...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 19, Rule ID: IS_SHOULD[1]
Message: Did you mean 'it'?
Suggestion: it
...y to chose this one. In conclusion, it is should be permitted dangerous sports an...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24475524476 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88071773051 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548951048951 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.5157322203 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.384615385 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236572751232 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815652879377 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647310477748 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159170244633 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429321814428 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.