Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views.
Upon graduating high school, the young tend to a question of whether is that should be continued with an study plan in the future or not. The highly a number of people believe that should choose one of two opinions to between study with higher academic programmes and get a job after graduate high school instantly, I strongly belive that the studying in the higher schools is the best way to guarantee to successful career. But the creation of a job straight after schools is also a reasonable opinion for the rest of them.
Working as soon as graduating high school bring to gain more opportunities for feature jobs in the future and become to live on independent without finance of their parents . Firstly, it is to earn money as soon as possible to prepare for their feature job in the future.This means that the independently on their own income will be able to establish a motivation for financial abilities since the time they were youth. Secondly, a person who choose to get a job instead of pursuing highly education is more likely to process rapidly in their careers. This may help to obtain a lot of real experience and skill in their chosen profession. For instance, in the developing countries, the government of this many countries intensify looking for human resource for the process of industrialization and modernization.
On the other hand, there are variety reasons why people tend to chosen study at university or college. Firstly, in the university or college, having a wider opportunities to meet higher level educations. Thus, students graduate with a degree qualifications will be a lot of conditions which have many obvious advantages for employer need to have in order to evaluated with other people. Secondly, this brings lot of opportunities to working in the other developing countries and guarantee in basic salary straight after school. Example, in Viet Nam, students with an engineering degree are highly paid and have a easy time to get a job perfectly.
In conclusion, it seems that the both choosing continue higher level education and working right after school instantly have unique advantages on their own.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...of industrialization and modernization. On the other hand, there ar...
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to continue'
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1794.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99721448468 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87474636562 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515320334262 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.1595089588 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.142857143 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6428571429 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212903229248 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751904996672 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732094052379 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12980208133 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0816458004295 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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