It is a debatable issue whether government should pay attention towards environmental contamination, illness and diseases or not.Although these matters are crucial to think, I believe legislation have some other sectors to pay attention which are more important.
On the one hand, there are many advantages of reducing environmental pollution. Undoubtedly, health of humanity is directly related to the state of environment, if pollution is reduced, people's health will be improved. In other terms, carbon emission from vehicles and factories in the atmosphere causes many diseases like asthma and cardinal diseases. To elaborate, as government promotes car-pooling system and the use of public transportation among people, a lot of carbon emission will be reduced. Therefore , human health and environment both would be benefited.
On the other hand, some experts advocate that government should pay attention towards other issues in the society instead of reducing pollution and improving housing system. They argue it because many downtrodden villages have lack of medical sevices, for instance, hospitals, medicals, and doctors. Due to this, people of these areas have to face many difficulties to avail these facilities, so government should arange free of cost medical services for all people in all areas. Apar from this, plight of pollution cannot be reduced without the support of all masses, so it is a wastage of time and funds of government to try for reducing environmental pollution. Thus, government should focus on improving people's health by aranging some good medical services for all people of the country.
In conclusion, eventhough health of people is related to environment's state , government should arrange medical facilities for all people to ensure their well being.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56934306569 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00298283414 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558394160584 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2541594408 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.166666667 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276124692218 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0996767655595 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709261592631 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159941354078 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501393325767 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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