Some people think that the government should offer financial support and care to old people while others think that people should save money for their future life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinions.
People have different views about whether the government should have policies to support the old. Although some argue that people need to save their own money, I believe that the government ought to provide financial aid and care for the old generation.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why the government should provide the old with financial assistance and care. First, since the elderly have spent most of their lives contributing to the society and paying taxes to the government, they deserve a peace of the national budget. For example, some countries in the Euro are supporting the old about financial aid and health care, which helps them have a better life. Second, the government needs to support the old in terms of financial aid and care to ensure fairness for themselves and the society as a whole. In fact, the large number of senior citizens do not have the ability to work due to declining physical and mental conditions.
On the other hand, saving money brings some benefits to the old and the society. Firstly, if old citizens have enough money to pay for their basic needs, the government fund will be spent on other crucial fields such as the health care system, education, and national defense. Thay way, standards of living would be enhanced in other aspects of life. Second, when the old suffer from a disease, they need money to cover healthcare services. As a result, their saving helps them do this without support from their offspring and grandchildren.
In conclusion, while it is partly true that the elderly need to save their own money in some cases, I still support the view that the government needs to help the old.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21897810219 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68107863398 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467153284672 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.0682109793 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.375 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.125 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4375 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338889547385 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127458413053 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100108399825 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239308151367 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0797111711962 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.