Some people think that government should spend money on faster means of transport other think that government spend money on other thinks like city and environment.Discuss both view and give your own opinion?
In modern era, it is believed that government should invest money on faster means of transport. However, other think that government must concern about the development of city and protection of environment by investing money. I agree with second view. I will discuss both views and my opinion in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, the development of cities is also important for better future of public, therefore government should invest money to make smart and pollution free city. this is because, more and more people who are living mainly in cities they are confronting many problems in city’s life like, accommodations and traffics. government must take step to provide good accommodation for public who are come to city for work from long distance. it can be solve only by investing money to affordable homes for everyone. So, they can comfortably live in city without wasting time in search of accommodation. Moreover, government should take step to in protection of environment as it is getting destroyed nowadays by pollution. government should invest money to make more machine which is helpful for recycling things like plastic and other which is effecting to environment negatively.
On the other hand, investing money on faster modes of transport is also necessary to some extent like, metro stations and bullet train. it will be helpful for workaholic people who are unable to use private vehicles on regular basis. In this case, fast transport will not only fruitful to save money, but also it will be beneficial for people to visit office on time. Consequently, it will reduce traffic in big cities if people have fast public transport, then people will not use and spend money to purchase private vehicle for any kind of purpose which also act to reduce pollution to some extent.
To conclude with my opinion, I feel that invest money to make smart cities, in protection of environment and introduce more faster transport for public all are important nowadays for government .
- Some people think that government should spend money on faster means of transport other think that government spend money on other thinks like city and environment.Discuss both view and give your own opinion? 73
- Some people think that government should spend money on faster means of transport other think that government spend money on other thinks like city and environment.Discuss both view and give your own opinion? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, moreover, second, so, then, therefore, i feel, kind of, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1700.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18292682927 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76600086809 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515243902439 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1665585201 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.25 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335721528314 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114311341713 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075588588858 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219845318564 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10689082706 0.056905535591 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.