Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. Some people think that the sway is extravagance money on the the arts and that this money could be better split elsewhere. I degree with this view.
Some people think that because they don't see convenient of arts give for country and government or maybe they don't like arts and fields of art and painting.
I will talk reason why they have think that. In my opinion, they have think that because in modern life appear many picture of famous painters and many painting enthusiasts. So, have many wasting money on famous picture of famous painters. Therefore, that picture cost up to hundred of millions if it comes to from famous artist and spreads widely. Nowadays, there are many people who are passionate about painting and that includes people in the government. Everyone has their passions and interests, but I don't see the government giving money to arts as a waste just because some people don't like it or don't see the benefit.
So that's why I say it's the right thing for the government to spend money on art and not because people think they shouldn't spend money on art but should invest it elsewhere. Example, from these in 1980, we get used to about important of art economic: arts gibe job, boots spenoling, attracts tourists. The consultants proved that on cultural groundwork give " exponential effect". Wasting it will give " sweet and light" cerrive these remote areas of local economy. That is no doubt that about arts have economic impact. Art investment is an important factor in promoting urban renaissance.
In the future, will have many people know these benefit that arts give for government and local
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, therefore, thus, no doubt, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1244.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91699604743 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50068652793 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529644268775 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5812262239 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8571428571 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0714285714 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247929463172 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845569354686 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744349645999 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160093018458 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351309986394 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.