There has been a good chunk of discussion on the necessity of sports. Athough it is true to suggested by many people that authorities should prohibit unsafe sports, I tend to be convinced by the idea that people should be given opportunities to play any sports or activities they want.
There are various reasons why dangerous sports should be banned by governments. Firstly, people who play them can be easily injured or even be dead. For instance, climbing is an unsafe sport that cause a number of death every year because of the lack of the health, food or medicines when they join. Morever, not only are they affected physically, but they are aslo affected mentally. Secondly, the consequences of injuries increase the burden for themshelves and their familites. To explain, they have to spend amount of money to cure, sometimes during their lifes.
On the other hand, it is understandable why people should have the right to choose any sports to play. To begin with, sports help everyone improve the health and gives them high energy despite the danger. As a result, many extreme sports organizations has been established and support equipments for paticipants. In addition, by playing extreme sports, people can find and boost the interest and passion for the life. For examples, they can become atheletes if they have enough talent and aspiration.
In conclusion, although government prohibits dangerous sport to protect people from being hurted, my opinion is that these activities should be allowed to play due to their merits.
- The increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment What are the causes of this What can be done to solve this problem 89
- Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports while others think people should have freedom to do any sports or activity Discuss both views and give your own opinion 61
- Some people think that the government should ban dangerous sports 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1287.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06692913386 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69771237446 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602362204724 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7520010519 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9285714286 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3571428571 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281158739782 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0964449978863 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.09507516101 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191506769474 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451914048016 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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