Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports, while other think should have the freedom to do any sports or activities. Discuss both views and give your own
it is sometimes argued that extreme game should not be operated, others believe that they should be chosen to engage in any athletics. Personally, I concur with the second view. On the one hand, there are a wide range of reasons why governments should prohibit these risky sports.
The first reason is these pastime threaten participants' life or injury. For example, they may face with the technical errors, this may cost the players' life. Numerous people have died owing to the fact that of playing severe sports such as scuba diving, jumping, and bull riding. In addition, there are alternative sports which is enjoyable, less risky, easy to play for all ages such as walking, playing badminton, swimming, and so on. Instead of choosing extreme sports which is inappropriate for everyone, they can pick less hazardous sports which brings them a plethora of fun, fulfilling as well as safety.
On the other hand, an increasing number of people desire their governments to put more resources into any sports. this is because risky sports provide players not only novelty but also pleasant that other sports cannot bring them. such difficulties and challenges can give them the chance of enhancing player's mental and overall well-being. Secondly, they can become more confident- self-reliance and determined which is necessary in their daily activities. When encountering these obstacles, they can get to know how to cope with situations.
In conclusion, although some people feel that it would be better for community to hinder intense sports, in my overall perspective, they should have more opportunities to play any sports that they are interested in.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20895522388 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70072966882 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619402985075 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.122271001 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7142857143 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1428571429 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.57142857143 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206382527199 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656780258108 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550163065555 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133483235302 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323382953908 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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