Some people think that higher salary is important when choosing a company to work for, while others think that good atmosphere at a workplace is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion with relevant examples.
Nowadays, there are many factors affect choosing a job, but which one is most important. Opinions differ as to whether higher salary or good atmosphere is more essential. personally, I do think both views are reasonable because each has its own features.
it is certainly true that the salary like a measure when picking a company to work for, especially for those who need to overcome financial difficulty. In other words, higher quarterage brings them good living conditions and improves themselves better. For instance, an university-graduate are looking for a job, naturally, the job has higher wage will be in his or her priority. Paying for living costs, travel, care services are the reasons for that choice. Conversely, if they take the job has low wage, maybe they will be hard to manage their life and family.
In the other way, good atmosphere is equally important element. Firstly, a great workplace influences the working-morale of staffs, it leads to the company's productivity and reputation. Secondly, it stimulates the creativity and then people will make some incredible things. However, they cannot feel comfortable and happy if they are in a space which always has competition and stress. In particular, two people, one is in commodious working-environment, one is in contrast to this, of course, who do not suffer any pressure will be inspired to the job more than the remaining person.
In summary, both views is equally central and has its own merits. I belive that no matter they use any factor for choosing a company to work for, they just effort and do not give up with their determination.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 106, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
... one is most important. Opinions differ as to whether higher salary or good atmosphere is mor...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Personally
...y or good atmosphere is more essential. personally, I do think both views are reasonable b...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...e because each has its own features. it is certainly true that the salary like ...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...proves themselves better. For instance, an university-graduate are looking for a j...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, then, as to, for instance, in contrast, in particular, in summary, of course, in contrast to, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04089219331 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01975914407 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617100371747 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0863062873 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9333333333 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4666666667 7.06120827912 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29086369081 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876120033382 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654782773709 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163891990372 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315072423254 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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