Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion
Some people believe that organizing an international sports event and the country is the host, which is good while others argue that it makes the country to be worst. Personally, this arguement has both advantages and disadvantages and this essay will provide suitable explanations with examples.
First of all, there are a lot of benefits when a country hosts an international sports event. The first positive effect is that many nations will know that country since this event will be recorded and showed to everybody on the world through the television by camera. As a result, it helps the country attracts more potential foreign companies to co-operate with local companies. This leads to increase the economy and reduce the unemployment problem by applying local people to work in factories and offices. For example, after seeing the hosting nation, foreign companies might travel to Vietnam to make a deal with them in many subjects such as infrastructures, hotels, and so on. Secondly, governments can create a good relationship with other nations by providing good quality of facilities to foreign athletes creating good marks for them to support that nation in the future. For instance, making a good place for organizing the international sports event will prove other countries that their good at managing big events and this will convince them to help their nation in the future.
On the other hand, hosting an international sports event still has some negative effects on the nation. The first disadvantage is that nation must spend a huge amount of cash to construct and organize this important event. Therefore, it will decrease the nation's funds so they can not upgrade or maintain infrastructures making people's lives become harder. Another drawback is that an international sports event will be always has a lot of people come to witness their favorite stars and it can become overcrowded if local securities and police do not control. This might turn the event from peace into chaos. Take an example in the USA, when fans see their stars lose, their feeling will turn into angry and can become rebels then start to damage many facilities if there are not having police and securities come to make order in that place.
In conclusion, hosting an international sports event requires a nation to have a big responsibility and if they success, they will receive many potential opportunities, which help them stronger. However, they will suffer lots of problems that they can not solve.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 951, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
... place for organizing the international sports event will prove other countries that t...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2093.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 411.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09245742092 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75853398943 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496350364964 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 646.2 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.430673599 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.117647059 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1764705882 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4117647059 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251466003097 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.096552376677 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0995645990019 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178041509606 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0772346767028 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 951, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
... place for organizing the international sports event will prove other countries that t...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2093.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 411.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09245742092 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75853398943 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496350364964 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 646.2 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.430673599 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.117647059 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1764705882 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4117647059 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251466003097 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.096552376677 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0995645990019 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178041509606 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0772346767028 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.