There are many advantages if teachers are strict. To begin with, discipline can only be
maintained if teachers are strict. For example, if students are afraid of the teacher, they will
attend classes regularly and complete their work in time. But, if the teacher is too strict,
then the students may lose interest in the subject and may not come to the teacher with
their problems.
On the other hand, a friendly teacher is like a good mentor with whom students can share
their problems. Students also take more interest in the subject. Students bloom under the
guidance of such a teacher. The disadvantage, however, is that a too friendly or partial
attitude results in diversion from studies.
In my opinion, a good teacher should be like a friend, philosopher and guide for his
students. But, from time to time, he should pull the reins so that the students do not go out
of hand. After all, he is shaping the future of the nation. There is a well known saying in
Sanskrit that ‘Acharya Devo Bhava’ which means that a teacher is like a God.
To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that, it has to be decided by the teacher when to
be friendly or strict and how much degree of friendliness or strictness is required because
extremes of both approaches are detrimental for the future of a student and ultimately for
the future of a nation.
- Illiteracy continues to be a concern for many countries in the world today What are the causes of illiteracy in the modern world and what effects does it have on the people concerned and society as a whole
- The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014 Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words 11
- Some people think if students are afraid of the teacher it is better Others say that having a friendly relationship between the teachers and students is better What do you think Which one do you support 56
- It is true that each country need to have rules and laws that all citizens must comply Some people argue that residents should be allowed to be free to do whatever they want I strongly believe that legislation is essential to ensure social safety To begin
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, then, well, after all, as to, for example, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1142.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71900826446 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57737313251 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553719008264 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.2574334336 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8461538462 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6153846154 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46153846154 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 16.0 4.38176352705 365% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239766118192 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0903348956227 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439698650678 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0776197537928 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538955170646 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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