Opinions are divided on whether the closer connection pertaining to economic and cultural aspects among nations is beneficial or not. While some argue globalization will eventually bring an end to cultural identities, I firmly believe its benefits are much more considerable.
It is understandable why many believe global interdependence may imperil national identities. First, there is a causal link between globalization and the loss of thousands of minor languages. In today’s global village, a substantial increase in cross-border trades is inevitable, requiring citizens from divergent nations to speak the same, international languages, namely English and Chinese. This, in turn, pushes a number of minor dialects to the brink of extinction. Second, several cultural traditions, customs, and norms may be less favored and die out eventually as a result of integration. In Vietnam, for example, the young generations are inclined to watch American or Korean movies rather than locally produced ones.
However, I assert that bridging the gap between nations will significantly benefit them as a whole. Trade barriers among countries are loosening due to globalization, thus enabling people to work in multinational corporations or to carry out foreign transactions. In other words, it affords people more job opportunities and boosts economic growth. Additionally, increasing cultural ties can be seen as a golden opportunity for people to expand their knowledge. Indeed, people are now able to travel beyond their national borders and explore numerous exotic places; they can acquire a deeper understanding of other cultures, including cuisines, festivals, and customs, to name but a few.
In concluding, although the increased interaction between countries proves to be a potential threat to the identities of the countries involved, I consider this phenomenon to be a positive development overall.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, second, so, thus, while, for example, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.74035087719 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28784474287 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7721354341 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.857142857 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196120410699 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585581413853 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0300487395647 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109058698467 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0161462282696 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.01 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.61 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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