Some people think that the increasing use of computers,and mobile phones in communication has negative effects on young people's reading and writing skills.
One of the most debatable issue today relates to development of computer and cell phone has some drawbacks on the young people's reading and writing skills. Presenting my view . I would intend to explore the aforementioned view in upcoming paragraphs
One side of the argument that people who argue that the today's era study skills is directly impacted by the communication devices . Considerably out weigh it's disadvantages . The main reason for believing this is that it is a bitter truth some of the people turn up to prefer the writing in computer but they also diprived of writing skills .The chief cause might be that students spend much more time to use the mobile phones. Moreover, Microsoft word is used by some companies . This must be because of , number of facilities is provided by this software . For instance , when a people write the wrong word so it erase by few a seconds .
On the other hand , it is also possible to make the opposing case . It is often argue that now a days news paper is being readed by students in the mobile phones . As a consequence , students vocabulary have been improved by this further development . Subsequently to that , students writing skills is being improved by the using of digital keyboard .
To conclusion, although there are good reason to use the mobile and computer directly effect on writing and reading skills . But in opinion digital keyboard is a further development .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, moreover, second, so, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1203.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0125 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75853258751 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570833333333 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 62.0834280691 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.9285714286 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1428571429 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.01903807615 598% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28306699033 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811843862988 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856891397229 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164036201758 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456294512357 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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