Some people think that individuals are not able to improve the environment. Only government and companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, environmental pollution has become one of the most important issues that every country’s society concerned about. Some individuals believe that it is the responsibility of the government and big companies to protect the environment because they hold the power and property of the resources while, individuals are too weak to make much effort, my opinion, every individual can make a difference with support of government and large companies.
Individuals have the responsibility and capability to save our world if they really concern about the environment. First of all, individuals should keep clean and tidy their surround cooperate with other neighbors. Fro instance, they can organize a campaign or club in the area that are volunteer to cope with other neighbors to clean the neighborhood, which can be help to protect the environment. Also, having a general knowledge of cleaning and recycling the garbage at their home would be help to keep the environment clean.
In addition, government and other large companies also need to be more aware of protecting the environment. The most important thing must be the effect on big companies and factories caused by public awareness and habits. Importantly, if the large companies and factories provide envirmental friendly behaviors to the public, it can be directly influence to the whole society. For example recycling system and removing harmful gases to the air can be control by large companies and factories. When disposal bags are not popular anymore in market, the manufactures should stop their production and have to find an eco friendly replacement instead. From providing a large service of recycling garbage around the world, public awareness and motivation by media and suitable law to the society are other options that government can create and who ever break the law, can be charged.
In conclusion, my point of view is that, everyone is responsible in protecting our planet, while government and companies should cooperate and it is their responsible to protect the environment with better influence to the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 216, Rule ID: FOR_FRO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'for'?
Suggestion: For
...urround cooperate with other neighbors. Fro instance, they can organize a campaign ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, really, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1786.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37951807229 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.011920178 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527108433735 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.120541069 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.384615385 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5384615385 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170748140275 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631806081884 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534995268399 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107382166203 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576654715639 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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