Some people think that it is best to live in a horizontal city while others think of vertical city.
Discuss both view and give your opinion.
Many people wonder what kind of city is better to settle down, horizontal or vertical city. Although both living in a skyscraper metropolis and settling in a horizontal city has the own unique advantages and disadvantages, I believe a horizontal city offer a better quality of life for its residents.
Living in a vertical city has some advantages and drawbacks. The convenience with variety of goods and services is one of the most significant benefits. There are many services provided in skyscrapers in the way which residents can reach easily. Moreover, the demand of daily necessaries is satisfied simply because of convenient stores and supermarket systems which are very common in a city with high population. The number of population itself is a drawback of a vertical city. A metropolis with skyscrapers, tall buildings usually have high population density. This is one of the components which lead to environmental problems in urban.
On the other hand, I think horizontal cities are worthier of living event though these cities have their own strengths and weaknesses, too. Low-level constructions, popular in the kind of city, allow the owners connect with their neighbours or the community in neighbourhood closely and frequently. Thus, inhabitants can enlarge their social network, know and help each other better when they are in difficulty. In addition, with the same area, horizontal cities usually have lower population, compared with vertical cities. This leads to the belief that the quality of air and environment in horizontal cities is more positive. However, lower population density is also the weaknesses of the cities. There are not a wide range of goods and services for residents living here because the market of these cities is not potential enough in the eyes of providers.
In conclusion, while living in a horizontal city or a vertical city brings many experiences, including positive and negative, it seems to me that horizontal cities is the better choice.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...horizontal cities is the better choice.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, thus, while, i think, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1684.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2625 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9773559474 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515625 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7566406231 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0588235294 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8235294118 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41176470588 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277561588533 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0858231450271 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862065392144 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180089584225 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534252354137 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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