Some people think that it is best to live in a horizontal city while others think of a vertical city. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is believed by many masses that horizontal city is the best choice to live in, while opponents hold the viewpoint that skyscrapers and high rise buildings offers more facilities. However horizontal cities provide some benefits to the people but, in my opinion, it is the best thing to be the part of the vertical city.
On the one hand, low-rise apartments considered as the better place since it provide numerous of facilities. In other words, masses take more privacy in these houses as they have their own garage as well as terrace. However, safety is also the another advantage for example, in the case of emergencies such as fire they can easily escape, they can run from the exit to towards the outside.
On the other hand, vertical cities have numerous of benefits for the folks. Firstly, these will tackle the problem of scarcity of land as there can be more than 100 houses on the same piece if land. Moreover, the rest land can be used for other purposes. For example, schools, hospitals and parks can be built on that land which ultimately boost the economy of the nation. However, vertical cities will convert the country in the modern one. Moreover, being in the same building people will more socializing with each other as they will share same garden, terrace and garage as well.
In conclusion, it is clear from the above discussion that their are some best reasons to live in horizontal cities. But in my opinion, the better option should be the part of the vertical cities
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 59, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...is clear from the above discussion that their are some best reasons to live in horizo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1248.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7816091954 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38565980484 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521072796935 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1180748328 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6153846154 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21718374785 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0843598615588 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0829764158386 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158867722775 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106625774049 0.056905535591 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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