Education plays a crucial role for children to carve their career into bright future.Children's schooling depends on their parents mindsets whether to send them for mixed school or single sex school.Both of them carrying the pros and cons.So,let discuss about both views and find a conclusion.
Education of boys and girls in same school will bring them together to participate in all competition regardless of gender difference.Now a days, in the society there is no role playing with a single gender and both of them have the equal rights.Other side,they feel shy and hesitate to work with other gender.
Some people argue that single sex schools are good for their children to concentrate on studies only.However,it doesn't make the sense of competition in the society.Moreover they can participate in any activity without a shy feeling.
To conclude this education with mixed schools are quite good for their children to work with other gender.But,negatives are not overweigh from the positivities.
- Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 56
- Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basic and a large number of children play computer games.What are the positive and negative effects of playing computer games? 22
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 851.0 1615.20841683 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 159.0 315.596192385 50% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35220125786 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 4.20363070211 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28884516385 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 176.041082164 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616352201258 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 506.74238477 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.2975951904 192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.623267565 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 212.75 106.682146367 199% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.75 20.7667163134 191% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112727714603 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666763194507 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0124892693785 0.0667982634062 19% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0666763194507 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0124892693785 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.6 13.0946893788 180% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.89 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.1190380762 174% => OK
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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