The recent decade, some parents worry about selecting their children’s school type based on gender. Although the part of people prefers to send their children to separate school, other including me, believe that coeducational school is more beneficial. Both of these views will be discussed in this essay.
A cluster of people argues that separate schools are better than mix school. First of all, it is safer and will have more security. Students are not mature enough in their school years so it is undeniable that certain boys bother other students like girls and as a result, the certain student may be unhappy to go to school. Secondly, it is obvious that in the separate school is less distraction. The students are not influenced by attractions of the opposite gender, so can focus on their studies rather than spending time on the emotional issue, and have more time to study and achieve a better academic performance.
The proportion of people avoid gender bias and permitted their children acquiring an education in the mixed college or school. First of all, these schools are a good chance for superior communication among of the gender, is good for later years. Clearly, this trend could prepare children for adult life social, people both gender will be removed certain fear of talking to opposite gender. Secondly, mixed school provide to be familiar with some characteristics of opposite gender and identify their differences, about feeling, wishes so this is more useful for them in the future relationship, especially for making a decision at the time of marriage.
By way of conclusion, both separate and coeducation school are various advantages but in my opinion mix schools are lucrative rather than separate school.
- Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? 73
- Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS AND GIVE YOU OP 78
- Some people believe that unpaid community service be a compulsory part of high school programs (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children)To what extent do you agree or disagree? 84
- some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people's lives. Other think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 67
- Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate school. Others, however, believe that girls and boys benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both views and give your own opinion 60
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13286713287 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66811398121 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534965034965 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.8159130046 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.923076923 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233723267243 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0924555021375 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578882247724 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154854280353 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367425502765 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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