Some people think it is good thing for the senior management positiona to have very high salaries compared to other workers of the some company or organisation. To what extent do you agree?
Money is the most important source to live a healthy and prosperous life. As a matter of fact, it is truely said that, a wise person should have money in their head, but not in their heart. In the increasing time of technological advancement, everyone wants high salary to fulfil their needs. Today eassy also relates to the same topic: Should senior management pasition have to high salaries as compare to another workers of the same company? I agree with the statement to some extent and explore the dimentions through examples.
Well frankly speaking, I completely agree that senior workers have high salaries as compared to other workers of the same company because senior workers have high responsibilities. Moreover, they have the high responsibility about the workers. They have to
manage all the works in the company. Furthermore, the are responsible for the any loss or profit in the company. Infact, a survey is also conducted by the other companies and is can be seen that, senior workers have higher responsibilies as compared to other, infact, they have higher salaries as compare to others. For instance, senior worker have the responsibility to know about all the junior workers, and afterwards, they have the information about the working of other workers. Second thing is that, senior worker are highly experienced than other workers as well as they are trustworthy person of the company because they worked in the company from many years.
As I said previously, I agree with the statement but to some extent. There is also some people who believes that, it is not good to give high salaries to the senior workes as comparebto others. Actually, all workers are same for the company. Afterwards, all workers are highly skilled and educated so why thier is discrimination between senior and other workers? It is the company responsibility to give equal salary to all workers of the company because they all work equally.
Thus, it can be ascertaind that it is a debetable issue. Although, I believe that, all workers are equal for the company but sometimes responsibilities, hardwork and ability of the workers can change the status of the worker.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 257, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sibility about the workers. They have to manage all the works in the company. Fur...
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Line 5, column 51, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... the works in the company. Furthermore, the are responsible for the any loss or profit ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, frankly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, thus, well, for instance, as a matter of fact, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1815.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02770083102 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82543859611 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.434903047091 0.561755894193 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 582.3 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5381878388 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5263157895 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26315789474 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.395569908271 0.244688304435 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126961652237 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0846979820143 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236900421602 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764550889785 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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