Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind such as reading and doing word puzzles Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time You should write at least 250 words You shou

Having free time is a luxury for people of every age. However, Some people argue the one must use their leisure time to improve mental health by some activities, while others believe that it is best to relax your mind. This essay will discuss, why it is crucial to invest your time in activities that can relax and improve your mental status.

To embark with, a certain set of society have faith that relaxation, while you have some free time, can boost body and mind. There are scientific proofs that support these statements, which shows with rest one can think better and fresh. On the other hand, taking a short power nap can reduce the stress level and can also provide other health benefits. Certainly, taking a rest is one of the best ways for mental health.

Apart from this, people who stay involved with some recreational activities in their spare time, for them this work as a double edge sword. Firstly, this increases the analytical skill and the efficiency of the mind to think better in a tough situation. Apparently, people love to relax in such activities, as it provides them happiness and thrill. Eventually, according to a survey from London's University, around sixty-five per cent of the person believed that being involved in activities in their free time make them more ready for the challenges on a usual workday. Consequently, being indulged in activities in spare time can provide aid in mental efficiency and upgrade in the skills.

To conclude, this essay discussed that, a certain set of people think that rest in leisure time is important for the mind, and why it is completely imperative to invest time in activities like reading, games are essential for mental health. As such activities not only helps to relax but raise the skillset and well prepare one for the next level challenges of life.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, so, well, while, apart from, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85350318471 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48468880252 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512738853503 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1737859483 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.857142857 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303025807953 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104913467891 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074316856687 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19633816891 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609248983586 0.056905535591 107% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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