People have discrepant views on how to utilize their spare time potently. While there are some merits to free the mind during free time,I maintain that spending leisure time on recreational activities such as reading or solving puzzles is much better option.
On the one hand, the idea of taking a respite during spare time is beneficial to some extent. First and foremost, giving refresh to mind would revitalize brain work, thus , it would help people to think more effectively. This is due to the fact that some individuals have excessively exhausting jobs,therefore,this precious period would offer them a valuable opportunity to respite and get away from their huge amount of workloads. Moreover,our brain is not machine,hence,resting time is mandatory. Indeed, using mind for extensive period without refreshing can cause extreme tension and poor mental health.
On the other hand, there are a variety of reasons why poeple should perform activities that enhance their brain productivity when they are free. In fact, reading books,newspapers or playing puzzle games is a useful way of entertaining in spare time. These habits not only help people to broaden their horizons and ameliorate their cognitive skills but they also help them to relieve some stress that accumulated after a hard day at schools or workplaces.As a result, these leisure activities will escalate creative power of our mind and boost human mindset effectively and logically in the long run.
In conclusion, it seems evident that both sides of the ida has its own unique advantages, however, i contend that performing activities that promote brain’s ability would do wonders a lots for the development of human creativity and intellectual capacity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33576642336 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05259678101 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649635036496 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.2081925401 49.4020404114 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.909090909 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9090909091 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2727272727 7.06120827912 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317744072419 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1090198498 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650998667161 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181375745225 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0864711323577 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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