Many people argue that in order to become successful in sport,a tough mentality does play a more crucial role than strong physicality. While no sportsperson can reach the top without mental qualities of determination and competitiveness, I maintain that the basis of success is physical strength.
On the one hand, the necessity of a strong mental attitude is beneficial to some extent. First and foremost, a great attempt during training period as well as real matches is required to gain fruitful achievements in sport. For example, spending an extensive period in the gym which may be extremely repetitive and tedious so aspiring athletes need a lot of effort to stay focused and overcome these difficulties to achieve their goals. Moreover, a competitive spirit also contributes to the success of sportsmen. Indeed, the competitiveness will powerfully motivate them to try their best to obtain the championship in the competitions. Therefore, a win-at-all-cost attitude is highly valued in the world of professional sports, and it is impossible to have a laid-back attitude and still succeed.
On the other hand, I contend that sustaining a strong fitness is the prerequisite key to success in all sport fields. The first reason is that without physical strength a person will never be successful to outweigh other counterparts in a sporting game. This can be apparently seen in some sports such as weightlifting, boxing or judo. Furthermore, a number of sports demand physical strength for stamina and endurance. A prime example for this case is jogging which requires athletes to run unstoppably on a lengthy track. Therefore, if the participant does not have a good physicality, he can not cope with the tiredness during the racetrack and can not manage to defeat other stronger candidates.
In conclusion, while maintaining a healthy mental state will do wonders for sportsmen to succeed in their chosen fields, I believe that the physical condition is also of paramount importance leading to the success in sport. In my view, I suppose it is a better option for sportspeople to balance between mental and physical health to climb the ladder of success.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, i suppose, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1829.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22571428571 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1309762447 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.903962521 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.3125 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.625 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270151952487 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079931208745 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649580643273 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164442955876 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695840311933 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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