Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sport which are played in teams, like football, while other people think that taking in individual sports, like tennis or swimming is better. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Many persons believed that playing team sports is crucial. Firstly, play in teams could make people better at communicating. This is mainly because players have to collaborate with their teammates to find out the strategy. By this way, players who play team sports could improve communicative skills. Secondly, people could make friends when joining team sports. This is because players have to play the sport with different people that they do not know. Therefore, when they play together long enough, they could create a friendship and expand their friend list.
On the other hand, there are those who think that individual sports are better. The first reason is that players who play individual sports could express their true identity. Because they do not need to follow others' guidance, they could not have a conflict. therefore, individual sports' players could think of their own idea and become freedom to bring the signature plan into reality. The second reason is that these type of players could have more room for improvements. This is mainly because players that play team sports need to depend on their teammates and they nearly get no space for practice. Where as individual sports' players are free to schedule their match to play and choose opponents to compete. By that way, they could have nobody to rely on so they become independent which is beneficial to getting better.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'Whereas'?
Suggestion: Whereas
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1140.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95652173913 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28525312658 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504347826087 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 331.2 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 230.0 20.2975951904 1133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1140.0 106.682146367 1069% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 230.0 20.7667163134 1108% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 70.0 7.06120827912 991% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209046048559 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.209046048559 0.084324248473 248% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178379821501 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00241791301581 0.056905535591 4% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 116.9 13.0946893788 893% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -145.05 50.2224549098 -289% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 90.6 11.3001002004 802% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.97 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 17.31 8.58950901804 202% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 33.0 78.4519038076 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 9.78957915832 562% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 94.0 10.1190380762 929% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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