Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams like football, while other people think that taking part in individual sports are better, like tennis or swimming.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Many people believe that there is a lot of benefits to involve in activities related to team-work sports such as football. While others believe that personal sports like tennis or swimming give more benefits than the other. I would argue that teams sports are better.
On the one hand, individual sports is beneficial in some ways. One of the reasons is that it is flexible in terms of time and places of play. For example, if you are a big fan of swimming, you could take it easy to go to any swimming pool in your city in order to swim. Furthermore, particular skills are easily enhanced by completely focusing on personal goals. For example, in order to become a good player, practicing thousands of times without disturbing anyone. This is an advantage of individual sports that brings us.
On the other hand, I believe that team-work activities are more advantage than individual sports. Firstly, it creates an enormous number of strong social relationship. For example, in a football team, many people related to loads of jobs that are a good opportunity to establish special relationships which will support your career in the future. Secondly, team-work helps to focus on common goals in lieu of personal goads that an effortless success comes easily. For instance, a football team will win easily, if they follow the coach’s strategy instead of each player playing to their wishes.
In conclusion, while individual activities have benefits to us, it seems to me that team activities give us more positive impacts on our live.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1286.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96525096525 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72262376993 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579150579151 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.2247387815 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7333333333 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2666666667 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266943296354 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0861732053651 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739141979616 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156358781721 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.085978050044 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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