Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football. While other people think that take part in individual sports is better, like tennis or swimming. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Over the past decade, many people have believed that participate in personal sports is more beneficial than team sports. This is a controversial issue that requires further discussions before a specific conclusion can be reached.
On the one hand, individual sports bring many positive effects on the players. Actually, people could develop personal skills and broaden their horizon through single sports. For example, a swimming athlete must maintain a balanced diet with healthy products which provide the wide range of nutrition to prepare for the harsh environment of competition. Moreover, personal sports players are able to get self-confidence. Therefore, they have the ability to apply that wonderful characteristic to various aspects of life.
On the other hand, it can be understood why others argue that team sports are more advantageous than ones. In fact, people who participate in team sports could build up solidarity as well as team spirit.
To achieve victory, team members must learn not only to coordinate with others but also contribute to the overall strategy. If a single player makes mistake, the result of the team would be extremely affected. In addition, players are able to expand social network through team sports. For instance, Lionel Messi and Louis Suarez are both playing football together in Barcelona clubs and becoming close friend in life.
Put it in the nutshell, benefits of team sports and individual sports are dependent on different types of players. From my perspective, people should take part in both simultaneously to become a well-rounded person
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in fact, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1346.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3625498008 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84216528818 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625498007968 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.458688974 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.7333333333 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7333333333 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.93333333333 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191224895971 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607025070177 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530408762701 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11559185635 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624329502666 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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