Some people think that it is more important to improve road and motorway than public transportation.
Do you agree or not?
It is true that transport development plays an important role in improving people’s daily lives. While I agree that road and motorway improvements are essential, I also believe that people should take public transportation into account.
On the one hand, it is necessary to make implement to road and motorways. Firstly, having better road and motorway systems helps reduce traffic congestion, a perennial problem in many cities. Take Hanoi as an example. Everyday in the rush hours, there would be endless traffic congestion on the grounds that roads are too small and crowded. Therefore, having better roads could solve this issue. Secondly, roads contribute to the economic growth of a city. In the past, places where roads run by had better chance to run a business because it would be more convenient to attract customers; nevertheless, that fact has not changed at present. If more roads were developed, people could make use of these roads to do a roaring trade.
On the other hand, it is wrong to reject the argument in favour of public transport. Firstly, using public transports saves the environment. Each person has a carbon footprint which directly affects our environment. When using private vehicles, we create more carbon footprint and therefore gradually destroy our surroundings. In contrast, using public transports is an efficient solution to this issue since its energy is eco-friendly. Secondly, public transportation is economical. It is clear that many people could not afford a car to travel. By using public transports, they could save a great deal of money for other purposes such as installing energy-saved household devices.
In conclusion, it is ludicrous to compare road and motorway with public transportation since they are equally important.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-02-04 | hachitran.03 | 73 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 219, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: Every day
... many cities. Take Hanoi as an example. Everyday in the rush hours, there would be endle...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34275618375 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93393058151 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597173144876 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0972658081 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5789473684 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8947368421 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.94736842105 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337781344753 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0971935367106 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0814287846065 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215230431039 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0856469053164 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.1 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.