Some people think it should be compulsory for people to retake their driving test every 5 years.what are the advantages and disadvantages of doing this?
In the modern world,there are more parameters to measure the development of a country.One of a main among these is the ratio of deaths.When considering about the total deaths of a year,accidents are responsible for a huge portion.Both drivers and pedestrians are involving for the accidents.But the cause for more accidents is drivers.Health conditions and capability of the drivers are directly effect for an accident.When a person takes the driving test need to prove both ability and health.
Main advantage of retaking the driving test is every person can get a certification about health and driving capability of themselves.And also this will improve the safety of all parties in the road.Within five years more things can be changed in a country like Sri Lanka.As a result of road development process,new highways are introduced to the society in past years.This may be a totally new experience for the most of people.There are more rules and regulations when using a highway.Speed limits,road signs,signal systems and many more things will be in a highway,but not same as in a normal road.If someone can retake the driving test in every five years they will be updated about every new point.And also this process will be a good income for a government.
When considering about disadvantages of this point,mainly we can identify the wasting of time.If the relevant government offices are running inefficiently everyone's time will be wasted.And also the corruption is a main thing that should be avoided.Using money or gifts for pass the driving test will be ruined the total value of this process.Another point is if a professional driver could not pass the driving test,because of any failure about his health or capability,it will effect directly for his whole life style.And this may be a cause for stopping the education of his children.
The main purpose of retake the driving test is improve the safety.This will also improve the quality of life.Because everyone can get a sureness about their lives in the road.This process should be maintained under the supervision of a knowledgeable and efficient team,According to all of these facts,retaking the driving test is real advantage for a country.This will reduce the number of accidents and save the lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
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Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1908.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1847826087 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28101454057 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483695652174 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 605.7 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
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Sentence length: 92.0 20.2975951904 453% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
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Chars per sentence: 477.0 106.682146367 447% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 92.0 20.7667163134 443% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 42.0 5.01903807615 837% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251566131501 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160166015679 0.084324248473 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458910735592 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160166015679 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458910735592 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 49.0 13.0946893788 374% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -21.9 50.2224549098 -44% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 39.2 11.3001002004 347% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.95 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.23 8.58950901804 142% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.5 9.78957915832 322% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 38.8 10.1190380762 383% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 39.0 10.7795591182 362% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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