Some people think that it would be better for large companies and industry to move to regional areas outside large urban centers.Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
It is often thought that it is preferable for big institutions and industries to relocate from urbanized areas to rural areas. In my opinion, I think that there are major benefits of this movement that overwhelm its drawbacks. Moreover, Individuals who live in rural areas will, without a doubt, gain a lot of advantages. In addition, residents, who live in urban centers, will have a clearer atmosphere but there are also downsides to be taken into account.
Unquestionably, there are significant positive aspects of moving from city centers to suburbs. Firstly, in regional areas, most people have to migrate to cities to guarantee a good job. Thus, shifting companies to rural zones will provide more job opportunities to support the poor live in the countryside; therefore, improving their social standards, boosting the economic activity, and help developing suburbs. Secondly, it is undeniable that businesses and factories produce waste which is detrimental for residents. As a result, the air has become polluted in the city which affects individuals' health. For example, a survey states that those who live near industrial areas have a much higher risk of getting serious diseases like Cancers. Furthermore, moving to rural regions will diminish air pollution and it will also lead to less congested areas in the city which is very advantageous.
Nonetheless, there are some minor obstacles caused by transferring industries to regional zones. One problem is the decline in productivity because of the delay in getting raw materials. Another obvious issue is the structural problems such as supplies of water, electricity and internet connection that are essential for leading the business. For instance, the lack of internet connection leads to unproductive work which will reduces the profits of organizations. However, these problems can be solved with proper planning.
To sum up, relocating huge industrial companies to regional locations is beneficial as it will minimize pollution, reduce the congestion in the cities, and provide work opportunities to the local people. Clearly, the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1820.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48192771084 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06064412485 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60843373494 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6639806921 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.111111111 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4444444444 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0555555556 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187994204234 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053335678724 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341882778963 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104685624359 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0182903027963 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.24 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 78.4519038076 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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