Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they are released from prison. What do you think are the causes of this? What effects will this have on society?
These days, more crimes are committed just at the moment that lawbreakers are released from prisons, as they are not able to come back to their ordinary lives. This essay will discuss the probable causes of this issue and the potential consequences it may have on societies.
Lack of emotional support is the main problem for prisoners after jail. Society does not accept people who have a criminal background, which causes a reduction in employment opportunities and the abstinence of social relationships. One other essential reason is social stigmatisation. In most societies, people despise those with previous convictions and refuse to socialise with them. For instance, individuals refuse to eat at the same restaurants, visit the same places those people go or even get along with them as friends or family relatives.
The possible effects of this problem include social disorganisation and homelessness. The propagation of terror and panic among societies is possible, as individuals will only expect the worst from these released prisoners. Thus, they would proceed with more criminal activities for earning money and having so-called normal life and unconsciously, society will terribly treat them and avoid dealing with them in every day interaction. As a consequence, homelessness will increase, resulting in various forms of social disorganisation.
Overall, when offenders are released from prison, many immediately commit new crimes; subsequently, they cannot return to their normal lives. It is mainly caused by social stigmatisation and inadequate emotional support, and it results in homelessness and different forms of social disorganisation.
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Suggestion: in everyday
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...erent forms of social disorganisation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, thus, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65737051793 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18971020664 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629482071713 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6714432731 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.230769231 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3076923077 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.38461538462 7.06120827912 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251686012206 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802855669505 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672470311104 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157827994829 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0724081818153 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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