In past two decades we have seen a rapid development of field of real estate. Some individuals are opine that taller and attractive buildings are important to city. Others, however, say that the interest should be spent on the school and hospitals. It is necessary to look both arguments before forming an opinion.
To begin with, education plays vital role in development of country or it is the instrument that accelerate development of country. In the developed nations, it is seen that most people have basic education. Though school play indirect role to support nation. Secondly, education has vital influence on the technology. And it gives leaders in the future. So, improving the school improve the country.
Furthermore, health is another necessity of people and hospitals are the centre of the health. If commuters are healthy than they are able to work and give their efforts to incrementation of county. It means that development in health care give wealth to the nation.
However, every country needs identity. The attractive building give the identity to the country. In addition, impressive structure also produce opportunity for income due to It become attraction for tourists. Tourists, for example, nowadays, are impressed by modern eye catching architecture thereby it opens the door for tourism industry.
On balance, we have to accept that education and health care make important role for human beings as well as country. However, identity of large and impressive buildings are also necessary. So, government and people should provide equal resources to both the sides.
- Psychologist have known for many years that colour can affect how people feel For this reason attention should be given to colour schemes when decorating places such as offices and hospitals How true this statement How far colour influence people s health 85
- Some people think that large, impressive buildings are important for a city. Others believe that the money should be spent on improving schools and hospitals.Discuss both these views and give your opinion. 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 100, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'opined'.
Suggestion: opined
...ld of real estate. Some individuals are opine that taller and attractive buildings ar...
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Line 3, column 209, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... that most people have basic education. Though school play indirect role to support na...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'well', 'for example', 'in addition', 'as well as', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.290657439446 0.247107183377 118% => OK
Verbs: 0.141868512111 0.155533422707 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0865051903114 0.0946595960268 91% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0346020761246 0.0501214627716 69% => OK
Pronouns: 0.038062283737 0.0437548338989 87% => OK
Prepositions: 0.121107266436 0.122226691241 99% => OK
Participles: 0.0242214532872 0.0403226058552 60% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.8091289188 2.80594681477 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.038062283737 0.0326793684256 116% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.083044982699 0.0861772015684 96% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00692041522491 0.021408717616 32% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00346020761246 0.011925033212 29% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1600.0 1933.35771543 83% => OK
No of words: 254.0 316.048096192 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.29921259843 6.12580529183 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20517956788 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.417322834646 0.374742101984 111% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.330708661417 0.28420135186 116% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.248031496063 0.203846283523 122% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.181102362205 0.137316102897 132% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8091289188 2.80594681477 100% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.037074148 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574803149606 0.56093040696 102% => OK
Word variations: 58.0986146835 60.7387585426 96% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0891783567 124% => OK
Sentence length: 12.7 20.7743622355 61% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.8881247129 49.517814964 56% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0 127.492653851 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.7 20.7743622355 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.65 0.814263465372 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 45.7708661417 49.1944974215 93% => OK
Elegance: 2.03225806452 1.69124875643 120% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323570387925 0.332605444948 97% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0804202490629 0.102741220458 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0771598054294 0.0668466124924 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.473130194146 0.534860350844 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.118842442727 0.148594505496 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112936378716 0.134430193775 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0886084054122 0.0742795772207 119% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.25001297443 0.324371583561 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0547029722236 0.0638462369009 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212425548439 0.228012699653 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0876201573696 0.058150111329 151% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.68436873747 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.41683366733 176% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 5.0 1.9629258517 255% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 10.4468937876 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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