In the contemporary world, international cooperation is established for global benefits. Many individuals believe that this organization plays an essential role in the conservation of the environment while there is an opinion that the central purpose is an opportunity for international commerce. This essay give the opinion that both the environment and global business are benefit from this united organization.
On the one hand, in terms of the environment, there are many problems must be dealt with. Therefore, the cooperation from many governments all over the world helps publish methods for some environmental problems which seem impossible to handle by one or a diminutive group of nations. Additionally, the protection of the environment may be extremely challenging for some third-world countries due to their underdeveloped technology and the lack of scientists. Thus, those nations need support from affluent nations, which international cooperation can be the answer.
On the other hand, the globalisation in business can benefits the economy to the great extent. Firstly, international trading helps extend the market. For instance, China attracts a numerous of labours on the world as well as its labour exporting, which enhance the economy and create more job opportunities. Furthermore, more international business is equivalent to give people more accessibility to approach various commodities, which can enhance people’s living standard. Finally, this united organization helps increase the solidarity among nations.
In conclusion, although globalisation has many positive effects on both environmental protection and international commerce, I believe that these are separate fields and cannot be compared with each other.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 309, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'gives'.
Suggestion: gives
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Line 5, column 54, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'benefit'
Suggestion: benefit
...hand, the globalisation in business can benefits the economy to the great extent. Firstl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, furthermore, may, so, therefore, third, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.89019607843 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.37411272458 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580392156863 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6897980002 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.538461538 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9230769231 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234006063562 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079911395611 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576533656109 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132195977328 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456870850444 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.81 50.2224549098 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.88 12.4159519038 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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