Education is the most powerful weapon for individuals can use to change their life. The question is believed by few individuals that kinders ought to start their primary pedagogy at a very early age Whereas, others says that they should begin their formal education after 7 years of age. I will discussed my views in subsequent paragraphs.
To embark with, why some people think that children should begin their formal education at a very early age the first and foremost reason is to get success. To make it more clear, if children start their studies at early age so, they can easily achieve their goals because people says that childhood is best stage to learn new things. A survey was conducted in USA by authority obtain that 90% school boy start their pedagogy at 3 years. Hence, they are more likely to achieve the best school performance.
On the other hand, there are some reason why it is believed that after 7 years is best age to start studies the major one is after 7 childrans are mentally and physical developed. In other words, some parents do not like to put burden on their kinders and they think that age is better to manage their study at school. Moreover, kinders make decision very easily because they are competely ready to make decision to related their life. For example, asia country named vietnam government make rules for students that is every students enter in school after 7 years of birth. As a result, youngesters can easily understand their teacher teaching method.
In conclusion, although some people thik after 7 is better age for children to start learning but according to my oppinion the earlier age is better to gain new things.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'discuss'
Suggestion: discuss
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
...n why it is believed that after 7 years is best age to start studies the major one is a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, moreover, so, whereas, for example, in conclusion, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1389.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78965517241 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37851310981 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506896551724 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6412723242 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.846153846 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139413467943 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544711335302 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054505744034 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0834260593394 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430982875553 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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