Male and female both are the amazing creature of mother nature, both are different by look as well as by physically. Because, of this reason few people believe that as both are not identicals, thus, few jobs are purely suit men and few are dedicatally for women. I strongly advocate this as nature made both unidentical ,so that we should follow the same principle which nature followed while creating human being.
Firstly, If we consider the case for male, it is well-known fact that men are physically strong so there are few jobs which need more physical efforts like, labour for building construction need to work tremendously hard whatever the weather condition. Thus, there type or jobs mainly comes to the bucket of men, as females might not be perform the task with the same manner as men can do.
On the other hand, There are plenty of jobs which only women can do, for an instance, caretaker of babies are the job where men will surely fail. Even though, men are physically perfect for this job, however, nature has created women more emotional
they can easily understand the need of a child compared to men. Therefore, a lot of jobs are meant for women only.
In the conclusion, As I mentioned above there are few jobs which only can be done by men and vice versa. Indeed, both are different but there are many areas where men and women are working together with the same ratio. However, Still there are many fields where only one can perform perfectly with respect to other.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 92, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...ther nature, both are different by look as well as by physically. Because, of this reason ...
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Line 1, column 220, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'suited'.
Suggestion: suited
...t identicals, thus, few jobs are purely suit men and few are dedicatally for women. ...
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Line 1, column 320, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ate this as nature made both unidentical ,so that we should follow the same princi...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e followed while creating human being. Firstly, If we consider the case for mal...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, as well as, with respect to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1236.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69961977186 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31716529688 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570342205323 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3480836237 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.363636364 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9090909091 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5454545455 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271069883164 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122143216942 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0849408061116 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177714174674 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667902238129 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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