Some people think that men and women have different qualities. therefore, some certain jobs are suitable for men and some job are suitable for women. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
In the modern life, gender discrimination is executed while equality is raised, therefore, there is no dramatic gap between men and women. however, some people opposed that differences exist in gender, some particular works is more suitable for men than women and in contrast, some more suitable for women than men. this essay sets out to argue that some jobs required specific gender.
The line between men and women tends to disappear due to the fact that discrimination is no longer acceptable in nowadays. people can do whatever they want, ignoring the gender and nothing is imposible. there is nothing can prevent human ability. For instance, men are now working in make up and fashion industry, such as Nguyen Cong Tri, who is a really talented fashion designer and well-known for his spectacular creativity. Moreover, sports are not limited for women, in fact, lots of feminine athletes have been very successful in many competitions, including football and body-building. These examples are evidents to prove that gender can't prevent people to do their wanted careers.
On the other hand, it is hard to acknowlege that speaking in science, there are difference in gender in both physical and mental aspects. it is true that some women could handle hard works requiring strong physical health and being muscular, however, this doesn't happen commonly, and the fact is that women are weaker than men. For men, in general, they are less emotional and soft than women, for that reason, women is doing better in jobs including feelings and caring. For example, most of baby-sisters or kindergarden teachers are women while shippers or physical workers mostly are men.
In conclusion, women and men are equal, nevertheless, there are still some differences based on science and biology, which leads to jobs suitable for certain gender.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, nevertheless, really, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact, in general, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17391304348 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67069368905 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0879499231 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.5 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3571428571 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.8571428571 7.06120827912 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.466252214851 0.244688304435 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149379075619 0.084324248473 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134579002406 0.0667982634062 201% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.322017341338 0.151304729494 213% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104791938922 0.056905535591 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.