Some people think that mobile phones should be banned in public places like libraries, shops and on public transport.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In some areas of the world, it is thought that there is a growing trend towards researching the past of the building or the house they reside. this tendency can be attributed to a whole hosts of reasons, there are a number of ways that can be done research into them.
On the one hand, the reason why some people have an inclination to gain thorough insights into historical events that took place in their residence are manifold. The first rationale is that they do this just out of curiosity. Obviously, they might learn about where they reside, which can provide them with a myriad of useful data points in order to have a deeper understanding of the condition and prior events of the house to guarantee their own safety. Another compelling reason is superstition. In fact, the older generations have a tendency to believe that the previous owner of their house will live in will exert some influence on the fortune of their own. Therefore, acquiring insights into the history of the building can help them avoid staying in a haunted place or something like that.
On the other hand, there are a whole host of possible methods that people can take to gain some information about the background of where they reside, Firstly, asking the local citizens or elderly neighbors could reveal a plethora of information about their house. Since these people who resided in those areas for a long time, they can provide some meaningful information if anyone wants to know about their living areas. In addition, in this cutting-edge world, with the development of technology, the internet is a prevalent tool and easy for people to access if they want to access any information in their daily lives. To illustrate, with just a click of a button or tap of the screen, they can easily gain insights into the construction of the building or major occurrences in the past.
In conclusion, the trend of conducting research on the historical events of the accommodation they live in can be ascribed to certain driving factors, people can carry out such research by following some of the suggested.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 144, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
... the building or the house they reside. this tendency can be attributed to a whole h...
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Line 3, column 38, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'hosts'?
Suggestion: hosts
.... On the other hand, there are a whole host of possible methods that people can tak...
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Line 4, column 200, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...an carry out such research by following some of the suggested.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, so, therefore, as for, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1728.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81337047354 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67045946036 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495821727019 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.9094978196 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.923076923 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6153846154 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106110803415 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0434822081728 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0234345771433 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0707033885335 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00818716062107 0.056905535591 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.