It is thought by some that money plays a key role in promoting happiness. In my opinion, there are many other factors that lead to happiness rather than money.
Having money leads to enjoy worldly pleasures, but mental peace is one of the richest thing that gives irreplaceable happiness. The people who earn millions are the one who always pray for mental peace, they are always struck with tensions such as business loss, reduction of shares and lot more. they are going to do nothing out of money without having peace of mind. people with a small house called as middle class are the happiest people who can afford their basic needs and spend some time with family which gives immense happiness to one's soul.
Other way that gives happiness is spending time with loved ones. for instance, a normal person who works few hours a day and come back home to be their with family, having dinner altogether discussing the things that happened in everyone's life everyday promotes tons of love and happiness. nothing can be compared with the happiness that we get spending time with our loved ones. Finally, for some traveling also gives happiness which makes us to forget everything and throws us into the world of thrill, excitement and happiness. It's also a kind of refreshment which ultimately leads to happiness.
To conclude, their are many factors that gives immense happiness than money could get. If people in the world strives for happiness rather than money world would be a better place.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, for instance, kind of, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1249.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87890625 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32772844253 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5546875 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5298606963 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0769230769 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6923076923 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61538461538 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307835636947 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119163786385 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594061926689 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215765849001 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616350692998 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.