Some people think that money is one of the most essential factors in promoting happiness.
Do you think people can be happy without much money?
What other factors contribute towards happiness?
Many people consider money as crucial factor of happiness. But, I believe that there are many other factors to create happiness. This essay will support my point of view.
It is agreed that, availability of enough money make life easier, however, I deny that only money cannot bring happiness in person life. Some people run only towards money by forgetting their peace of mind and satisfaction. For intense, many international research had also revealed that, people are more happy in developing countries than in developed countries. This also proof that only being rich is proof of being happy. Furthermore, every people dreamed about future life and want to achieve dream profession, where they fel satisfaction. Furthermore, some people want to contribute to society or needy, which give them inner peace. Such as, some people work as social workers to help the person who are in needed, there they cannot earn more but can feel the peace of mind of contributing to society.
In other hand, happy and healthy family is another essential part of happiness. Our society is the main example of happy family is the key point of cherish life for every individual. Likewise, maximum divorce case are always from wealthy family than others. People life away from their family to earn more money but, on the craze of more earning they cannot enjoy family life, they cannot see their child growing. Overall, family love is important than 6 digit pay cheque.
In sum up, human can live happily with less money and satisfaction and inner peace is more important than earning more.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 237, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun research seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much international research', 'a good deal of international research'.
Suggestion: much international research; a good deal of international research
... of mind and satisfaction. For intense, many international research had also revealed that, people are more...
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Line 2, column 545, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Two successive sentences begin with the same adverb. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...rofession, where they fel satisfaction. Furthermore, some people want to contribute to soci...
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Line 3, column 465, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'cheque' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'cheques'.
Suggestion: cheques
...mily love is important than 6 digit pay cheque. In sum up, human can live happily wit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, likewise, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1316.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98484848485 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43355219967 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579545454545 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9856391049 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.25 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.625 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258039625645 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855451317892 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062337575308 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140023316671 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664478123965 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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