You should spend about 20 minutes on this task You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture Write a letter to your landlord In your letter introduce

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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.

Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter

introduce yourself

explain what is wrong with the furniture

say what action you would like the landlord to take

You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Begin your letter as follows:

Dear .................,

You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Mr. Smith,
Good afternoon

I am writing to you regarding the issue on furniture condition on our apartment. As you know, we had just shifted in your apartment and as per the contract all the furnitures and fixture are included on the rent. But, after moving here i didnot find some of them are in good working condition.

Some chairs you provided are very vintage and legs are loose as well and we also found scratch in our wooden dinning table, Sofa you gave us on sitting area have a hole and fur of pet, probably prervious tenant had a puppies. All these things are destroying my decor of apartment.

As per our contract, you have to provide all the fixtures and furnitures new branded and good working condition, which we had already paid to you. But, we did not found some of them as expected and my familyis not happy with this issue. So i humble request you to change all this broken thing with new one as soon as possible and make our stay comfortable.

Have a nice day.

Thank you.

With regards,
Asmita Acharya

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
Dear Mr. Smith, Good afternoon I am writing to you regarding the issue o...
^
Line 4, column 71, Rule ID: APARTMENT-FLAT[1]
Message: This word is common for American English. Did you mean 'flat'?
Suggestion: flat
...the issue on furniture condition on our apartment. As you know, we had just shifted in yo...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 123, Rule ID: APARTMENT-FLAT[1]
Message: This word is common for American English. Did you mean 'flat'?
Suggestion: flat
...s you know, we had just shifted in your apartment and as per the contract all the furnitu...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 237, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: i is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...ded on the rent. But, after moving here i didnot find some of them are in good wo...
^
Line 6, column 216, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a puppy' or simply 'puppies'?
Suggestion: a puppy; puppies
...r of pet, probably prervious tenant had a puppies. All these things are destroying my dec...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 271, Rule ID: APARTMENT-FLAT[1]
Message: This word is common for American English. Did you mean 'flat'?
Suggestion: flat
...these things are destroying my decor of apartment. As per our contract, you have to p...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 241, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: i is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
... familyis not happy with this issue. So i humble request you to change all this b...
^
Line 8, column 326, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n thing with new one as soon as possible and make our stay comfortable. Have a...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, well, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 860.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57446808511 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34289038484 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61170212766 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.4256252554 44.8134815571 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 4.34317383033 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231520655144 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891775197145 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662984911264 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159295928957 0.12726935374 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568176586545 0.0580467560999 98% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
Dear Mr. Smith, Good afternoon I am writing to you regarding the issue o...
^
Line 4, column 71, Rule ID: APARTMENT-FLAT[1]
Message: This word is common for American English. Did you mean 'flat'?
Suggestion: flat
...the issue on furniture condition on our apartment. As you know, we had just shifted in yo...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 123, Rule ID: APARTMENT-FLAT[1]
Message: This word is common for American English. Did you mean 'flat'?
Suggestion: flat
...s you know, we had just shifted in your apartment and as per the contract all the furnitu...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 237, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: i is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...ded on the rent. But, after moving here i didnot find some of them are in good wo...
^
Line 6, column 216, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a puppy' or simply 'puppies'?
Suggestion: a puppy; puppies
...r of pet, probably prervious tenant had a puppies. All these things are destroying my dec...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 271, Rule ID: APARTMENT-FLAT[1]
Message: This word is common for American English. Did you mean 'flat'?
Suggestion: flat
...these things are destroying my decor of apartment. As per our contract, you have to p...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 241, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: i is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
... familyis not happy with this issue. So i humble request you to change all this b...
^
Line 8, column 326, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n thing with new one as soon as possible and make our stay comfortable. Have a...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, well, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 860.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57446808511 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34289038484 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61170212766 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.4256252554 44.8134815571 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 4.34317383033 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231520655144 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891775197145 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662984911264 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159295928957 0.12726935374 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568176586545 0.0580467560999 98% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.