: Some people think the money spent on developing technology for space exploration is not justified. However, there are more beneficial ways to spend this money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that allotting the financial resources into thriving technological breakthrough in outer space projects is worthy .From my point of view , despite distributing money into the space exploration is worthy to some extent, I believe that this fund could be used for others purposes .
To begin with, there are a range of justifications to advocate of investing in space exploration . The foremost rationale is that the environmental degradation such as global warming ,green house effects which comes the industrialization process mankind has been devoid of rare metals that can be found on other planets. It has been proved that these metals have been found in fragments of meteorites crashing the Earth ,illustrating the variety of them in the universe .Undoubtedly, a new planet found is a fecund land for human development to flourish again .
Despite the mentioned motivates for funding space explorations, I believe that is fails to cope with the roots of all problems .Firstly, investing the money in space journey which costs the large amount of money and just affords for the wealthy nations . In addition, the scarcity of metals and environment contamination of the Earth results from detrimental institution of people . For instance, if the people maintain their harmful practices in the new planet, they will eventually demolish the second home as they done with the Earth .So as to stop this circle , all the citizens need to raise their awareness about the vital role of environment and develop for the green technology when it still possible .
In conclusion, funding on the space exploration would help the residents to gain a lot of benefits in the future .On the contrary, I believed that contribute this fund on enhancing to the Earth‘s status is a more sustainable life style choice .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, so, still, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16326530612 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98893310311 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595238095238 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.5826038042 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 189.75 106.682146367 178% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.75 20.7667163134 177% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.5 7.06120827912 234% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217632431731 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838055565534 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598983593157 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122960310827 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586007140522 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.2 13.0946893788 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.24 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.