Some people think that new reports in the media have no connections with people lives . Therefore ,it is a waste of time reading newspaper or watching TV news programs. To what extent to you argree or disagree .
Some individual claim that it is a waste of time reading or watching news which are irrelevant to what happening in our own lives . I totally disagree with this opion due to several reasons mentioned in this essay.
On the one hand , there are some causes for why people refuse to obtain the news . News cover a wide range of information from politic , education , sport to education . Therefore, people find it difficult to connect it directly with their own life . For example, we could hardly find any relationship between a farmer life and a report of the status of the war in the Middle east or the change of political system of a country all over the world. However , I reckon that it is just a lack of perspective of how crucial information could be in one lifes.
On the other hand , People staying up-to date with the news can gain enormous benefits in comparison with those who do not pay attention to the information . Frequently reading news report article citizens can understand the policies of the country more clearly and behave more appropriately . Additionally , people who connected with the news can have great opportunity to broad the horizon in various aspect of their lives. They could accumulate not only several solution for tackling many issues which are usually indicated in newspaper or program on TV , but also knowledge about some prevalent phenomenon to share with their friend.
In conclusion , I want to reaffirm that acquiring news plays a vital role in our lives. Although the benefits of this are depended on an individuals’s judgment, there is no waste of time in it.
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- Some people think that young people should follow the tradition of the society Others think that young people should be free to behave as individual Discuss both views and give your opinion
- Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies Do you agree or disagree 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, for example, i reckon, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83870967742 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71661401743 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554838709677 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2414804652 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.75 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.412537994248 0.244688304435 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133096100374 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100072162894 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250874625625 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.156774472784 0.056905535591 275% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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